First Draft Feedback

Our first feedback received a reoccurring level of feedback. The majority of our feedback included the video including too many shots of our artist singing, too many similar shots (framing and angle), no effects (incomplete) and finally too little transitions. Therefore to improve this we will firstly need to rearrange the order of shots and complete the length of our video before applying after effects to exaggerate our image and to create a stronger link between imagery and the lyrics/sound. This could be achieved through finding new and interesting effects to give the video more coherency, because otherwise the audience will gradually get bored with the similar and repetitive singing shots that will lower our overall marks. Another potentiality would be to get some more filming done, so that we can accordingly fit in the correct footage that suits our video best.