0:19 contrast
0:21 contrast
0:37 lips
0:50-51 shots do not match
0:53 remove green from the hay
0:21 contrast
0:37 lips
0:50-51 shots do not match
0:53 remove green from the hay
Too many alley way shots
remove car park scenes
too samey :2:30
remove car park scenes
too samey :2:30
I will change these things that my teacher has mentioned, as they all play a role in making the video more coherent and consistent with a narrative that makes sense. It also improves the overall elegance of our music video.