Teacher Review- prior to first draft

Mrs Brookes thought that some of our shots were too similar, thus she recommended that we apply more variation to our music video. Similarly, she thought that we needed to include more group shots of the guys 'having fun' as a majority of the shots are just of our main performer Paleme (Jordan) singing to the camera. Although this draft hasn't got any after effects on it yet, because our group is planning to make it colourful and visually more vibrant. I will now attempt to change the video in accordance with our teachers advice, so as to get the produce the best possible music video and receive a grade appropriate to this.